cephalofille's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mavis Scuba!]

Hoooohh mon dieu! C'est magnifque!! :D
I don't know the character but you drew her so beautifully I feel like watching the show she comes from! The pose it's so sexy and well drawn anatomically! It's one of the most creative pinup poses I've seen from you, and in erotic art in general. It's so alluring and hot!

And the dialogue just makes it even better! I love that it's referring that she's a scuba diver with the outfit as well! Your art style is so cool it makes me me wish that one day you could make my characters Pierre and Rita, remembering that Rita is a scuba diver too. And a teuthologist, hehe

Furboz responds:

You really need to see the Hotel Transilvania Movies!! they are pure gold in animation and story telling... well the second not so much, but the others are!

[Toriel's free milk]

Toriel is one of the best MILF's ever! But her desing it's a bit complicated for people I guess, because rare is the artwork I see where she's beautiful and sexy but also conserves her sweet personality.
Thanks a lot for choosing her! I think you did such a great work portraying her personality here, and I'm so grateful for! Also, the perspective it's awesome! I love the outfit you've given her, they jacket its so cool! And the free milk tshirt it's perfect joke for her because she's a goat! hehe

Furboz responds:

Yes Toriel is hard to draw right! I tried before and I didn't liked the result... I think this one is a bit better =)

[The Amazing Three]

Ooooh mon dieu! J'adore!!! :3 Mate this is awesome! Fifi kills me! XD She's so beautiful! And it impresses me that even she's fully dressed and she's so elegant, yet she's so sexy! Well all of them are!
I think this shows that a girl doesn't need to be light of clothes to be femenine and sensual. I love their outfits, the transparency on the dresses, the lights and shading is delightful! It's really cool how you put a light behind them, it makes them look like pop stars! Your lineart and coloring it's excellent!

Furboz responds:

Thank you so much for your kind comment =) Glad you liked it so much =)

[Compound Cephalopod]

I gave you the last vote that last vote that was missing to have a score! ^^
Even if I din't get the concept of this, I really like the drawing technique ! It's stunning! There's a lot of detail in this piece that is just very nice to see!

Grump-o-rama responds:

It's a mashup of a squid and compound eyes, I'm glad you like it!

[The Goose is Loose]

It's a pretty good drawing, the face it's good and also the hair, the expression it's very good cos it goes well with what you wanted to express on this drawing!
I think the anatomy and the perspective need a lot work, though. The perspective and the pose are a bit off, the pose looks forced. And your anatomy it's not well proportionned, even for this pesperctive you wanted to give, because even if the butt is more close to the viewer's eye, it shouldn't be that big, also the waist should be less tin to be more well proportionned. I think to improve this drawing you could reduce the butt part and make a big bigger the torso and waist part.
well...Unless you're drawing her on a "toony style" like Jessica Rabbit, who has drawn with a very disproportionnated body on purpose because that is the cartoon style, for exemple. In this case it's it's ok like that I think hehe

Also, if I may help, I think your phrase in french it's way far away from what you wanted to saw. By the symbol I deduct you wanted to say "don't touch", and actually this say "not emotive" because émouvant means "moving" or "touching" but relative to emotions. And it's not well conjugated. I think it would be better to say "ne me touche pas" that means "don't touch me" or "ne touche pas" that means "don't touch it" if she's referring to the butt.

NickyVendetta responds:

Thank you for your critique and yes it is in a toony style. Like with Emezie's style if you seen his series on youtube. And "pose looks forced"? Lol, I dunno what you mean by that. If you ever seen PC&FS you understand why.
But thanks for being mature about this and trying to help. Bye.

[Lah the ghost]

Wow this is really awesome!! Not sure who's the character but I love her design! I really liked how neat and clear the lines are, the gost-like transparency is so beautiful and smooth! I specially liked how she teases with his top showing off a bit of her beautiful breasts! The backgroung it's of a good color cos it makes good contrast with the character's body, and those eyes are gorgeous!

Furboz responds:

I thank you kindly I spent quite good time getting all the effects right =) This ghost appears in a short movie called night of the Wherehog of Sonic...

Here's the link to it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dFn0DIHKfn0