It's a pretty good drawing, the face it's good and also the hair, the expression it's very good cos it goes well with what you wanted to express on this drawing!
I think the anatomy and the perspective need a lot work, though. The perspective and the pose are a bit off, the pose looks forced. And your anatomy it's not well proportionned, even for this pesperctive you wanted to give, because even if the butt is more close to the viewer's eye, it shouldn't be that big, also the waist should be less tin to be more well proportionned. I think to improve this drawing you could reduce the butt part and make a big bigger the torso and waist part.
well...Unless you're drawing her on a "toony style" like Jessica Rabbit, who has drawn with a very disproportionnated body on purpose because that is the cartoon style, for exemple. In this case it's it's ok like that I think hehe
Also, if I may help, I think your phrase in french it's way far away from what you wanted to saw. By the symbol I deduct you wanted to say "don't touch", and actually this say "not emotive" because émouvant means "moving" or "touching" but relative to emotions. And it's not well conjugated. I think it would be better to say "ne me touche pas" that means "don't touch me" or "ne touche pas" that means "don't touch it" if she's referring to the butt.